Mr-CasTRO's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NinjaKoopa:Ep1AHeroIsBorn]

well..

there's not too much i can say that hasn't already been said. you have a good idea with this. alittle cliched but make sure to work on your timing next time. alot of it could've been alot funnier if each joke didn't drag too much. on the other hand, some of the lamer jokes make me smirk because the timing was so off. i'm not usually a fan of random swearing, but the "it's on now, bitches" was pretty humorous. i didn't see that coming. so yeah, pick up the speed, clean up your drawings, filter your sound better, and try moving the mouths (beaks) for the voice acting. peace. 3/5

[Tears of Red]

great starting out

i liked the overall feel to this animation, but there are alot of bugs like some of the text getting cut off and the spelling on "faught." some more sound effect could've made it more engrossing as well as changing the music during that final fight scene. the fart scene seemed awkward at best. besides that, it was worth the watch and i congratulate you on going after some substance instead of mindless violence (like 90% of the portal seems to be like). cheers.

immortaltechnique responds:

thanks heaps .. all ur comments r appreciated! haha especially ............the spelling thing .......
lol
anyway .. i didnt want it to be an average story line .. even if the animation was a bit krapped off .. haha thanks :)